Haiku (and an errant limerick).
Mar. 7th, 2008 01:23 amKeep in mind, I'm a little out of practice. I apologise if these are terrible.
wyldkyss:
Mississippi green
Artistic development
For the sake of love
nomfaux:
Muted morning sounds
The business of family
Masking concerned dreams
cailement:
Cherry blossom's land
An auspicious occasion
When teaching is home
michette:
Involuted shelf
A consequence of a life
Celebrated scorned
razelore:
Undertook a task
A path of preparation
Diverged toward home
raidingparty:
There once was a party, upbraiding,
Which desired desire's fading.
Their wishes fulfilled,
Heart's blood pumped till spilled
And the party had to go wading.
giana:
Friends found in friend's friends
Smooth, water flows over the oars
Aside, yet central
Strict form verse always puts me in a weird headspace...
I think I'm going to go to bed, now. Been a weird day, over all.
Mississippi green
Artistic development
For the sake of love
Muted morning sounds
The business of family
Masking concerned dreams
Cherry blossom's land
An auspicious occasion
When teaching is home
Involuted shelf
A consequence of a life
Celebrated scorned
Undertook a task
A path of preparation
Diverged toward home
There once was a party, upbraiding,
Which desired desire's fading.
Their wishes fulfilled,
Heart's blood pumped till spilled
And the party had to go wading.
Friends found in friend's friends
Smooth, water flows over the oars
Aside, yet central
Strict form verse always puts me in a weird headspace...
I think I'm going to go to bed, now. Been a weird day, over all.
no subject
Date: 2008-03-08 11:28 pm (UTC)I usually find verse to help; I end up wandering all over the place without some shape to color in. (And then break the rules when appropriate, as long as I know the rules in the first place.)
no subject
Date: 2008-03-09 12:02 am (UTC)(headtilt)
Date: 2008-03-09 11:46 pm (UTC)Elsewise, I like desire. I just want to know what to do with it.
Either way, cheerio.