This one's for karishi

[wolven7]

Just remember that the words can only stop if you let them.
Just put the pen to the paper and the fingers to the board.
Just read and work and move, from day to day.
Just describe what you see and hear.

Your knowledge of what you want will guide you.
Your keen insight will show the way.
Your ineluctable ideas drag everyone with you.
Your dispositional phrases dispose you.

Words of awareness;
Words of error;
Words for lviing;
Words for rest.

Here are the asides:
Here are the things they need to know:
Here, on beginning

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That was harder than i thought it would be.

I still owe ones to fmephisto, sadistic_apollo, teididh, and possibly kittenspeaks, but i think I may have written hers, already. I'll check

Comments

Ineluctable!

[karishi.livejournal.com]

It's totally going to be added to my list of vocab words to crush monsters in Bookworm Adventure.

Re: Ineluctable!

[wolven.livejournal.com]

There's a typo in there, and some strange word choice, and a hidden message. I'm sure you'll find them all. :)

Re: Ineluctable!

[karishi.livejournal.com]

I already had, all three.
Had I been writing it, I'd have included a fourth line after your last line that simply said,
Here:
But the inconsistency at the end also works well. And thank you, for the encouragement.

Re: Ineluctable!

[wolven.livejournal.com]

Sorry. TWO Secret Messages. I realised my numbering mistake after I'd sent the comment. It's tw secret messages.

Have you ever read Poe's "A Valentine"?

Trying too hard

[karishi.livejournal.com]

Either I am or you were. Unless the second Message is the way the end points to the first Message, I got nothin'.

Re: Trying too hard

[wolven.livejournal.com]

First letter of the first line, second of the second, and so on.

I wrote the poem around that, which is what made it so difficult. To make a poem that had that central (so to speak) message, in all ways.

Maybe a little too oblique, but, hey: It was fun.

Re: Trying too hard

[karishi.livejournal.com]

It amuses me that the typo is necessary.

Re: Trying too hard

[wolven.livejournal.com]

Precisely. It was meant to be pretty amusing. ^_^